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player information!


preferred name ; Armell
age ; 18
how you prefer to be contacted ; PM
characters you already play ; Thalix Boulpher , Haley Pine, Timolin Winokur


character information!


the basics
character name ; Stephanie O’Hera Kane
nickname(s) ; Hera, Steph, Kane
age ; 15
date of birth ; Oct 31,1992
blood status; pure blood
sexual orientation ; straight
wand ; 10 in/Yew/ phoenix feather
affiliation ; Death eaters overall self goal: “ herself”(in the end )


the appearance
height & weight ; Hera has a height of 5’5 and she’s 104ibs. Hera’s weight appears rather small but not to the extent of looking underweight. Also though shes 5’5 she manages to make up for her height with taller peers by using her tall attitude and self confidence. Hera usually consider her weight a great bit due to her eating habits of portions that she’s learned from being a part of the fashion portion of her father’s business. But being at Hogwarts sometimes causes her to give into temptation and eat those things she wouldn’t normally eat, or at least eat more of it.


hair ; Hera possesses naturally wavy/ curly brunette hair. Her hair flows down past her mid back. She has also found that over time it tends to grow fast therefore causing her to get it trimmed a great bit. Her hair isn’t her best feauture but the length and medium fullness of it definitely draws the attention of people. Sometimes her hair appears to carry some blonde in it, but it usually dosent show until heated seasons that would bleach her hair cause of sunlight.


eyes ; Hera has the most piercing blue eyes, its almost like looking into the eyes of a snake with icy blue eyes. Her eyes are actually a shade of blue that isn’t commonly seen in eyes. The hue of her eye carries a gray inner lining but a steelblue shade around the edges leading into the bluish gray part closest to the center. Some people like her eyes and then there are some others that are intimidated by the, but mostly because of the attitude that comes along with it.


facial features ; Hera is well known for her almost flawless skin, because of model treatments and high maintenance on it. Hera’s skin gives off a natural glow almost like what someone would have in the south. This is basically because of her mother’s mixed descent with some Spanish heritage. Her lips are also known for their fullness amongst the guys, either as the sweetest treat or the lips of deceit.


distinguishing features ; The most distinguishing feature Hera has on her body is just herself as a whole. Being a model from youth up has caused her to take careful care of her figure and skin. Also her father’s wealth opens her doors to have only the best products, thereby rendering the best results for someone such as her. Her hair is sometimes said to be distinguishing depending on if she feels like doing something different other than letting it hang, which sometimes she does do, on a super “on top of the world day”.


style ;Hera wears it all, except for clothes that are baggie. Sometimes she takes on a preppy or sexy look. At other times she will wear jeans and a t-shirt. But one thing is for sure shes always wearing her fathers products called Kaneisis. These clothes consist of almost every style in high fashion. Hera tends to look spectacular no matter what shes wearing. She also tries to assecorise with things that match her personality such as a snake bracelet or a necklace with a cross skull on it. Hera loves her clothes and she loves fashion, to her every morning is like preparing for a fashion show, but its more about her ego than it is getting attention. She knows she’s all that, she just wants to remind everyone of it.

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the personality
likes ;

Fashion Every since she was young Hera has found a fascination with fashion, mainly because of her dads involvement in it, as well as several other venues. Hera finds fashion to be a part of her since she grew up doing runway shows and modeling for the camera. Hera has been in several magazines and has a quite bit of fame from it as a successful young model. To Hera fashion is something everyone should be in tuned with and though it may sound strange that she feels everyone should have some fashion sense fashion has honestly become a part of her. She always keeps the best of Kanesis whenever she’s out and about, you better believe it.


Modeling Another thing she likes to do is model. Though Modeling and fashion may seem to be the same thing theyre actually not. Reason being is because in modeling there are nude pictures, and head shots and though she hasn’t done any nude she does plan on doing some in the future. Hera sees modeling as her having a way to set herself on a pedestal for all of everyone to see. Whenever Hera is walking down the runway she feels as if shes a queen and the paparazzi and the people are her servants. Modeling also gives her a way to let off stress, in those high tense moments she just lets it all out as she walks down the runway or when shes taking an intense picture.


Boy toys There’s nothing better than a good ol’ boy toy to Hera. She like to have guys wrapped around her fingers, because she can. Having a guy after her or waiting on her hand and foot only makes her feel more powerful because of the known dominance men carry. Hera deep down would want to find love, but she and her egotistical ways are too married to her that she can’t put a boy before her dominance as a whole. The times she has been with a boy its ended pretty fast but then always manages to be an on and off type of thing. Though she carries her pureblood views, she still dosent mind a half-blood boy toy to play with as an appetizer.


Zhenya Gurov Hera has an odd and seemingly obsessive liking for Zhenya, but not in the freaky way. Though Hera mainly likes Zhenya for what she can get from her in the area of dominance, she also actually looks up to her as a role model. Though Zhenyas not the best role model for someone Hera finds in Zhenya what she wants to see in herself oneday. To Hera Zhenya is like the queen of all and if you can’t kill the queen, then why not join her and pledge your allegiance. Though sometimes her presence can seem annoying to Zhenya, she still acts as if it wasn’t and continues on after her glory. She’s also found that Zhenya at times treats her as a servant, but because of Hera’s values she knows that sometimes you have to serve and wait your turn if you have any shot at ruling.


Female Dominance Dominance is almost everything to Hera. She even takes from her name and the story behind it and feels that she should be this great female force in the world, that may be small now but in time she feels she will grow. Her need for glory and dominance is almost like water to her, if she finds that shes fading in the eyes of others, she finds a way to get before them once more and have their attention. She dosent only want to just be famous or special to people and not even for everyone to like her. But what Heara does want is to have dominance, over whatever, whenever, and however she wants.


dislikes ;

Veronica McNair The disliking she has for Veronica is rather secret. One thing about Hera is she goes with the flow of power, but nevertheless she still see’s something in Zhenya as an individual that she doesn’t see in the others. But Hera has found veronica to be just like a jacket to her, when things are going cold for her and Veronica has the power as she did when Zhenya was gone Hera moved closer to Veronica, but not out of any reason but the desire to be close to the power. But once Zhenya returned Hera’s attraction towards Veronica flame seemed to die down to a disliking and jealousy almost for her appearing to be moving close to Zhenya in ways of dominance and the transferring of that dominance. As said before she never really liked Veronica for nothing else but the power and now that Veronica is seeming to detract from her, it only makes her jealously pissed off.


Competition She hates when there is completion. Sometimes she wishes that she could just do some things with no problem. When someone steps or is standing in her way of accomplishing her plans it tends to make her highly upset and annoyed. Hera sometimes goes to mildly great measures to eliminate competition, and if its something shes not skilled enough to do she usually finds a guy of acquired skill to do it with promise of some returned favor. Hera can’t stand competing and loosing, and that’s why she goes to such great lengths to cover up any evidence of her going down, and does whatever she can to prevent it from happening.


flaws ( skin/fashion/anywhere on her ) Hera finds herself constantly watching herself to be sure shes flawless. This isn’t something she just does with her appearance, but also with her overall personal deliverance. Reason why shes constantly trying to be so perfect is because she wants to be remembered as the best at everything she does. While modeling she has told the makeup crew to do her makeup over after hours of work on her makeup so that she could be flawless. She usually refers to herself when looking in the mirror as being that “flawless bitc$.” Hera knows that everyone makes mistakes and has bad days, but that’s not going to stop her from thinking she can be perfect and flawless in her delivery as a person.


Thalix Boulpher[/ b] Another dislike she has is her half-brother Thalix Boulpher. Yes he’s pureblood and all but it’s mostly a territory issue, with her and her brother having everything left to them she feels that to actually be part of the family half-brothers don’t count. With their dad being such a successful and powerful man she sees inheritance as a major thing and wants to have as much of it to herself as possible. She also finds the boy to be annoying because of his egotistical “ Thalixander the Great “bullcrap. She still acts as if she doesn’t know that he’s her brother and he assumes that she doesn’t know, but she does. To Hera hes an intrusion and one that in the future would e dealt with. Her dad wants to know him in time, and to recruit him as a death eater since he wants all of his children to follow the so called “right path”, but Hera scorns at the idea of doing so.


[b]Not being in on things
Another thing that Hera dislikes is not being included on plans. When she finds that something has gone on and she wasn’t chosen to be a part of it, she gets rather tempered. The reason being is because when shes not included she begins to think that maybe she’s not a good enough asset to whatever the group of friends or the plan may be and it makes her push back for her spot in the task at hand. Then there are times when she will just get angry and plot to do something in revenge, usually to the person she feels is to blame for robbing her spotlight in the situation. It’s just better to keep her on the list to include, because she has a mind for payback when she feels she’s been worked over or overlooked its then that she decides to make her presence known.


strengths ;

Deceit One of Hera’s biggest strengths is deceit. Hera has had lots of experience watching her parents be deceitful in many occasions which only makes it easier for her to know how to do so. To Hera deceit is a gift given to those whom know how to use it effectively, and without the ability a life of deceit will fall apart for someone. People usually don’t realize she’s being deceitful, because she knows exactly how to do things so that she’s not recognized for her true intentions or motives but yet for what she’s trying to portray as the situation externally. She has never really gotten caught in her deceit, but those that know her and hate her knows that she cannot be trusted. Even the group of people she hangs around spells deceit clearly for the whole world to see.


Determination When Hera has her mind set on doing something she will achieve it. Every since she was young and was told that she wouldn’t be successful as a young model she has never stopped proving people wrong. With her determination great things can happen, if she encounters the right knowledge to apply her determination too. Hera has always felt that you never start something without finishing it, even if you would die in the process of it, you should go out flawlessly beautiful and making your name known. Determination is key to her and its exactly what shes seen in her dad, and its exactly the reason why he’s so successful.


Name The name Kane echoes in both the wizarding world and also in the muggle world. Everyone knows a Kane when they see one, because they wear the best clothes. They also carry a certain presence of dominance because of both their wealth and their belief in their own destiny as being a great one. Hera always gets special attention from people when shes somewhere because shes known for her modeling also along with her name. After seeing that she possessed the talent her dad put her as the model for the finale dress for each showing and they have haven’t ceased to amaze yet. The Kane name is definitely one that brings favor, but also through fear at times.



weaknesses ;
Older guys Hera has always had a weakness for older guys and mostly because her and her mom don’t get along as well and it was an act of rebellion that just turned into something she liked….older guys. She finds that the attention they can give is far better than the mediocre attention of a mere boy. She sees men as having more experience thereby making her more valuable if they found her to be something special. She will occasionally become vulnerable and drop her guard for the right older man because he gives of something that shes drawn to like a moth to the fire.


The Unlearned knowledge Another weakness that Hera has is her lack of knowledge for the things of the dark. Sometimes her mouth tends to get her in situations where it would be easier to handle things had she known how to do a few things. She has been looking for someone to teach her for years, feeling that she’s always been ready to learn, (practice makes perfect ). She feels that knowledge is a powerful thing, that without it the whole world ceases to operate. She also feels that she doesn’t have time for useless knowledge or learning something that’s not going to advance her and her motives in society.


Her dad Hera’s last weakness is her dad. She is so devoted to her dad hand and foot and will do whatever is needed to follow his orders as a daughter. She is somewhat intimidated of him cause of the things she’s seen him do, but she’s also crazy about him cause he spoils her with both things and love. He treats her as if she is his little princess giving her whatsoever she desires. Her dad is a major key to her heart and if used the right way, her dad could potentially be the top thing that would break her heart, say something were to happen to him or so.


boggart ; seeing herself as a muggle or half-blood (being less in any situation, not being on top )
amortentia ; clothing fabric
erised ; To be the best and to be the top female no matter what situation she’s in.
veritaserum ; Her and her brother have witnessed their dad kill people for DE purposes.
dementor ; When her dad slightly beat her brother for not following his orders as a means to teach him early that obedience is best when being a DE.
patronus ; Her happiest memory is when she’s on a runway and the cameras are flashing.


personality ;
Heras personality is especially that of a teen bitc$. She loves to manipulate and use deceit in her favor and she rarely shows her inner skin without shedding it and bthen displaying something completely different. In other words shes not an open book but you can feel free to read the cover. She sees people as one thing most of the time and that’s either stepping stones or stumbling blocks in her path. She loves to be the center of dominance and with that dominance having attention cause of it. She has found that her personality and confident strength draws those who share a similar vision of hers, but careful not to step on her toes cause she will strike back. Hera acts somewhat similar to the greek mythological Hera, possessing triats of jelousy when someone tries to take what’s hers.


Hera’s view on guys consists mostly of any girls view on them except for the twist of liking older men. But she likes younger older men, and if it ever came to the point of the man being way old then there must be a serious reason why she’s using him, probably in order to get something of high value that she couldn’t obtain any other way. Hera sees guys as a way to accentuate her dominance, because when dominance gives glory to dominance it makes the receiving dominance greater if that makes sense. She has also found that she likes to play toy soldier with a few half-blood guys hearts, but only for fun, never with any intention on carrying out anything permanent other than mere fun and games and manipulation. Most guys see her as either hot, or territory that’s too hot to touch ( attitude ).


When it comes to the females, Hera gets very territorial. She was silent at first with dealing with the girls but as they got to know her more they grasped that she was also like a spider sitting in her web and once you got in it you were pretty much stuck. Girls see her as a beautiful it girl at times but also a hateful bitc$ on her rather badder days. Most girls try to befriend her because of her status and fame but she knows how to sort them out from the right ones to let in the circle and the ones that needed to be kicked out of it. She definitely hates it when a girl is all bent up on a guy as if he was her last chance at oxygen, she feels that a man needs her and not the other way around.


When it comes to authority she’s pretty much the wild child. There’s nothing she hates more than being told what to do when she has her own plans set in mind. Shes usually one to get in trouble quite a bit, either from being somewhere shes not suppose to or either for doing something hurtful in someway to another student. There are some cases that she doesn’t mind authority and that’s with an attractive male that’s in authority. Other than that she doesn’t really get along with those whom say theyre only reporting her actions for her safety and the safety of other students. She feels that bullcrap like that is just absurd and unnecessary, she strongly believes that Hogwarts is kind of lame in the area of the teaching of dark arts not being available. She also views the idea of blood status as being a compliment to her need for dominance and power. She believes that the pure are the best and she uses it as means to exalt herself above people as to say that she’s on top and they’re like peasants. She does on the other hand find dominance and being in power to be more important than a blood status. In other words if push came to shove and her values on blood had to be compromised to receive a place of dominance she would take it because to her nobody is even comparable to what she plans on becoming over time.



the school life
year ; Fifth
pet ; “Mitch” Calico cat
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favourite subject ; Her favorite subject is potions, because she likes learning how to brew things up, who knows when a potion will come in handy.
worst subject ; Her worst subject is herbology because it requires her to get dirty, which is something she dosent like doing if she hasn’t already planned to or if it’s not going to benefit her directly.
best spell ; Stupify
worst spell ; Patronus

OWLs taking and grades ; for first to third years, students will study the core subjects only. fourth and fifth years must pick up to three elective classes ( choose from: care of magical creatures, ancient runes, arithmancy, muggle studies and divination. ) for characters in their sixth and seventh years, please note the grades that your character achieved for each subject. also, please note if your student wishes to take part in duelling class

  • Astronomy ( core )
  • Charms ( core )
  • Defence Against the Dark Arts ( core )
  • Herbology ( core )
  • History of Magic ( core )
  • Potions ( core )
  • Transfiguration ( core )
  • Care Of Magical Creatures
  • Arithmacy
  • Divination


NEWTs taking ; students in the sixth and seventh year can take a maximum of seven NEWTs. they can consist of any of the OWLs they passed ( grades A, E, or O ) also, in their sixth and seventh years, students may opt to take wandless magic and animagus studies. Please note which your character wishes to study. this can be one or both and are in addition to the maximum of seven NEWTs












the family life
mother ; Rebekah Saphet, 44, pureblood
father ; Alexander Kane, 45, blood status
siblings ;Augustus Kane, 17, pureblood
siblings ; Thalix Boulpher ( half-brother ) , 16, pureblood

other significant magical relatives ; N/A

residence ; The heart of London
history ;
Hera’s parents Rebekah Saphet and Alexander Kane meet through school, they both were Slytherines and they both were rather popular for their attitude and how they handled things, much like Alexander does now. Upon exiting school they found themselves going separate paths for some time. Alexander started inventing things , while Rebekah went off and started doing fashion. A few years later they meet at a popular bar and discussed business, Alexander was flourishing but she wasn’t doing so well. He then decided to give her a chance and he opened up his own clothing line with her as the background designer. It wasn’t long and Kane creations was made popular. Out of all the years to come the Kaneisis line was the most successful and the most noted out of their history in the industry.


Upon stepping into a pool of wealth and success the two began a romantic life once more. In the process the time came when Rebekah found that she was pregnant. Upon the nine month mark she gave birth to a healthy son named Augustus Kane. During this same time around the seventh or so month of pregnancy Alexander found himself sleeping with a woman from Hogwarts when he went there called Sarah Boulpher at the time cause she was newlywed and had gotten drunk as did he at the party but not as much. Months later Sarah gave birth to Thalix Boulper who then became a distant and left alone part of the family. Sarah knowing who Alexander was and what kind of life he lived told him to stay away from Thalix and her family. Alexander on the other hand wanted Thalix to be a part of his family regime.


Almost a year or two later Alexander and Rebekah gave birth to Stephanie O’Hera Kane whom was quite the little joy to have around they would soon find. In Stephanies younger years she found herself taking a big interest in fashion, and when time came she delivered on it and was an upcoming star, only slightly glimmering at first. She started off in little runway shows at the age of nine and it had seemed to be just a phase at first in her parents eyes, but then she started being called upon for photoshoots. It wasn’t too long till she stared in top magazines such as;>>(click these) Magical Teen,Wiz/Mag, and Charmed Magazine. (Once Stephanie started going to Hogwarts she began scheduling for the breaks to do photo shoots and star in events. ) Though Stephanie enjoyed the publicity and fame she had already grown to be a confidant girl and felt as if she was already on top of the world in her own mind. Also since she wasn’t amongst the teenagers that mostly viewed those magazines she didn’t really have too many people that would relate to her about the covers and the editorials on a star struck level until she went to Hogwarts were that age audience was. Many unpureblood fans found that she came off a little bitc$y but Hera didn’t care much cause she knew at the end of the day someone else still envied her life of fame. Even from a young age her dad would instill in them the values associated with most death eaters but it was in an odd way, making dominance the focus more than blood purification. It was almost as if he was more focused on their name being remembered from generation to generation than just blood purification, but nevertheless that was a huge part of it also. She soon found herself growing more and more in stardom and in the process her ego grew also and she became mildly spoiled, but mostly she just turned into a dominating little girl towards anyone other than her dad and her brother at times. Her dad felt that she should be a free spirit and to live up to the Kane name, crushing anything that stood in the way of greatness.


There was also an occasion once where she was heading towards her dads office and ran into a confrontation and found her dad giving the order for a man to be killed for an unknown reason to her but she knew it had something to do with some act of opposition. Upon seeing the man killed in her presence by one of her dads “muscles” or (“henchman” maybe you could say.) Her dad saw her and later explained that that was “mans reward for disobedience.” It wasn’t too long till her father was put on trial, since it took place in his office, but he kept a cool demeanor and placed it all on his “muscle” saying that the two had a confrontation and that he would never have allowed such nonsense in his facility had he known and within he was smiling the whole time. They then found him not guilty because everyone that was in the room testified the same thing. Her dad was a very cunning man that always got away with what he did. Malia his wife had always supported him no matter what even though sometimes it drove her to worry. Even just the sight of him being carried away to jail seemed to be a bit much, but being declared not guilty only won his graces back and even stronger in the publics’ eye. As the years went by she tried to integrate with the man she saw her dad being and tried to become a female version of him, to make him proud. For a while she had to think about the death of the man but somehow the power her dad possessed and her undying faith in him won her over.


He would always be hard on her brother Augustus and he would try so hard to be like him but it had always seemd to fail and result in total disunion. When Hera was of age she attended Hogwarts for the first time. Her first years there were rather like going to jail at first because of being under administration. She was in trouble several times for acts that were clearly against Hogwarts rules. For example she once used incindeo and set a girls hair on fire who was gossiping about her not being all that. When the fire finally was out and the girl was crying Hera was just laughing and as she was being pulled out she said,” see how hot I am now….bitc$.” It was then the teacher got direct sense she had done it and Hera was made to clean the bathrooms for a month, but she only got older fellow housmate boys to bully other kids into cleaning it up so she didn’t have to. She managed to find herself cleaning the bathrooms, or at least being assigned to , quite a few times, especially the time when she turned the apple on the teachers desk into a mouse because she knew the professor was scared of them. Though Stephanie did many acts like these, though not super big they still carried weight and got recognized as potential strength by her friends for it, and with her fame it only made adapting and coming into a higher level of position a lot easier.


She found her classes to be ok, but at times rather boring if it wasn’t something to be learned that would help her become the next Alexander Kane when it came to his dark side. That’s another reason why shes known as the class spark, because she would always try and start some wrong act and get someone else blamed for it. She also found that she had a special liking for many of the male professors, and maybe a forced encounter or two at times because of her newfound liking in older men, but that was toward her later years ( end of 4th year ). She had found herself manipulating guys to do her dirty work rather than taking the direct approach and getting into trouble as she did in her prior years. And she also managed to begin making connections with some girls that packed quite a bit of power. She found herself trying to get closer to Zhenya Gurov after her return from Durmstrang hoping to use Zhenya to become a stronger female in the wizardring world.Though she finds Hogwarts to be a rather rewarding experience and a close match in experiencing the world of magic that was to come, she still has a need within to be associated with something more dark and with time she would find that something to associate herself with, and at the moment she feels that that gold mine is Zhenya Gurov, and she wants every bit of dark gold.



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« Reply #1 on Oct 13, 2009, 1:09am »

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Hi, Armell,

Another good application, you are so very close to being accepted. I’d just like a little clarification on a few points:

  • You say that her father encouraged her to be free-spirited which lead to clashes with her mother. Free-spirited how? What kind of clashes? How has this affected her relationship with her mother in the long run?
  • If her father killed a man, what happened in the aftermath? The vast majority of murders will be investigated by the Ministry. How did he get away with murder? Was there an investigation? Was he arrested and tried? How did the murder affect her father and the family as a whole? Aside from wanting to emulate her father, how has it affected Stephanie?
  • Her life since joining Hogwarts should be fleshed out a little. She’s been there for four full years and so should have more to write about. Try elaborating on her acts of insubordination and subsequent punishments, and indeed anything else that she may have experienced in her first four years of school.
  • You claim that her fame makes her in the popularity stakes, and I have no problem with her modelling for her father’s fashion line. I even see that you make a note of her love of modelling in her personality but it would be beneficial to see it in the context of her personal history. When did she begin modelling? How often does she step in front of the camera? Where can one find her pictures? Who would’ve been likely to see said pictures in order to associate her with the fame she supposedly has?


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 Re: Stephanie O'Hera Kane
« Reply #2 on Oct 13, 2009, 6:54am »

Helloz, how do you be doin this fine day. ;D Anywayz I've made the following corrections.


> I removed the conflict with her and her mom ( I didnt like that road 4 her and her mom )


> I made it where her dad gave order for the man to be killed, yet since it was in his office he was still put on trial but got off for the witnesses blaming it on the man that recieved order to kill saying that he acted alone out of anger cause of conflict.


> I also mentioned her road to fame and even made some fun magazine covers with her on it if you click the colorful magazine titles in that part. ;)


> I finally also added some incedents of her rule breaking to acentuate her insubordination and also to expand on her time at hogwarts which was basically trouble trouble and getting into more trouble :-X .

If you fine people need anything else you know were to find me. ( PEACE ) 8-)
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 Re: Stephanie O'Hera Kane
« Reply #3 on Oct 19, 2009, 8:15pm »

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"Without hesitation, I knew once upon your head. In you classic ideals of the wizarding world are hardly dead. You already know your place, let's not keep the secret in. Take your place with the others in Slytherin!"

Another Slytherin ego, eh? I'm surprised the common room holds enough space to house them all... You know the drill by now, right?

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